1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 86 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Illegal Cooking Oil Is Everywhere Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning,
2、 and 3) give your comments. 2 On Food Safety Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 3 On Drunk Driving Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your e
3、ssay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 4 The Negative Influence of the Internet Bar Study the picture carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected
4、by it, and 3) give your point of view. You should write 160-200 words. 5 The Importance of Abiding by Traffic Rules Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 考研英语（写作）模拟试
5、卷 86 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 As is shown in the picture, several casks of illegal cooking oil are the source to a cooking oil factory, a supermarket and a restaurant. Then the waste cooking oil from the restaurant
6、 is recycled and collected back to the production, sale and use cycle. This picture vividly illustrates the process of how illegal cooking oil is produced, sold, used and reused. It sends a strong message to us that this hazardous oil seems to exist in every part of our life.For the sake of peoples
7、health, the authorities concerned must enhance the law enforcement to eliminate the practice of producing and selling illegal cooking oil. First, a special team needs to be set up to locate any unlawful oil production factories. Once found, the owners should be charged for criminal offence, as they
8、have put others lives in danger. Second, the authorities concerned should set up a hotline so that the public could get through on it to the special team and tip them off. A reward could be offered to the “whistle-blower“ as an incentive.To sum up, the elimination of illegal cooking oil depends on t
9、he joint efforts from the government and the general public.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了地沟油从生产、销售到使用、回收的情景。整个产业链可谓完备。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出地沟油似乎无处不在，整个产业链俨然完备。第二段指出有关部门应该加强执法来遏制地沟油的生产和售卖。其一，成立专项小组，彻查任何违法生产地沟油的工厂。其二，设立举报热线，鼓励群众提供线索，并给予一定的奖励。第三段总结全文：根除地沟油，需要政府和群众的共同努力。【知识模块】 大作文写作2 【正确答案】 In the picture
10、, a man is probing the food market cautiously for mines, some of which have already been found, namely Sudan III, formalin, and melamine. This picture vividly illustrates the severity of food safety issue in China. To buy untainted food, you now have to arm to the teeth. Otherwise, your life and you
11、r familys life will probably be at risk.In my opinion, food safety issue must be addressed with great urgency and effective measures. First, the authorities concerned must inspect more samples and do more tests to properly serve the watchdog function. For example, 10% of the vegetables in food marke
12、ts need to be randomly tested on a daily basis for pesticide residue. Once problems are found, the whole batch of food must be sealed and a warning should be made to the general public. Second, more stringent penalties for illegal food processing should be imposed to deter potential wrongdoers.In co
13、nclusion, food safety has everything to do with citizens well-being. The government must spare no effort to ensure it.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一名男士拿着探雷器在菜市场扫雷的情景。从图片可看出，菜市场的“地雷”不少，一不小心就会遭受其害。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：中国食品安全问题非常严重。第二段提出个人看法：必须立刻采取有效措施来解决食品安全问题。其一，相关部门应发挥好监管和检验职能，对菜市场的食品多抽样多检查。其二，
14、应该订立更严厉的处罚措施，使其能对非法加工食品的罪犯起到有效的震慑作用。第三段总结全文：食品安全关系到每个市民的健康，政府应该不遗余力地保障食品安全。【知识模块】 大作文写作3 【正确答案】 As can be seen in the picture, a car crashes into a tree. The shadow of the car is a large winebottle. Underneath the picture the caption reads: “The power of wine“. This picture warns us of the danger of
15、 drunk driving, which will lead to catastrophic consequences. The power of wine, as the picture indicates, can take peoples life.In my eyes, drunk driving is a serious offence that spells disaster for the drunk drivers and people around them. To tackle this problem, the authorities concerned should
16、impose strict rules and regulations to prevent accidents of this sort from happening. First, random drunk tests should be administered to drivers. If they fail those tests, they shall be punished accordingly. Second, a record system, based on the drunk driving history and other traffic offences, sho
17、uld be set up. Those who are found drunk driving again and again should be punished severely e-nough to deter other potential offenders.To conclude, we should send the message to drivers that to drive after drinking is irresponsible, for drunk driving poses a threat to drivers themselves as well as
18、other people.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一场车祸，车的倒影是一个酒瓶。从图解可以看出该图是要谴责醉驾行为。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：警告我们醉驾的危害。第二段提出个人看法：我们应采取行动打击醉驾。其一，应对司机实施不定期的酒精检查，没有通过检查就要受到相应的处罚。其二，应建立一个记录系统，严惩一再醉驾的司机。第三段总结全文：应向司机传递信息酒后驾驶是不负责任的。【知识模块】 大作文写作4 【正确答案】 In the picture, Xiao Baos parents and grandparents are looking
19、 for him. Near them is a well with the inscription “the Internet bar“. Xiao Baos schoolbag is right next to the well. This picture, though implicitly, tries to tell its readers the danger of the Internet bar. Many children are devoured by this monster, as it lures them with online games and other ea
20、rthly pleasures.In my opinion, the owners of the Internet bars should take on more responsibilities to address this problem. To begin with, they should prohibit children under 18 from entering the Internet bars. They should be punished, if they are found serving kids. Moreover, real name registratio
21、n should be practiced in the Internet bars. For instance, those who go to the bars should have their ID cards ready for registration. And all the users login and logout information shall be linked with their ID cards, which will form an Internet bar user database that is available to the police in c
22、ase of locating a missing person.To sum up, Xiao Baos tragedy could be prevented if the Internet bar owners provide service for adults only and register users real name in the bars.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一家人在寻找小宝的情景。小宝很有可能掉进了“网吧”的井里，难以自拔。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：许多青少年掉进网吧的深渊，无法自拔。第二段提出个人看法：网吧
23、店主应承担更多责任来解决这一问题。其一，网吧应该禁止未满 18 周岁的人入内。其二，网吧应该实行实名登记，让在网吧上网的人有迹可寻。第三段总结全文：禁止未满 18 周岁的人进网吧和实行实名登记能避免小宝悲剧的重演。【知识模块】 大作文写作5 【正确答案】 In the picture, four road rollers stop at the intersection of two one-way streets, implying that two road rollers are going in the wrong direction not allowed by traffic re
24、gulations. A traffic conductor is standing right in the middle of the intersection, raising his arms in surrender. This picture intends to tell us the importance of abiding by traffic rules, the violation of which would lead to a waste of time or even traffic accidents.In my opinion, the government
25、should take two measures to raise peoples awareness of following traffic rules. First, some propaganda campaigns should be launched to warn people of the serious consequences of disregarding traffic rules. We will waste our time or even risk our lives when we take the rules lightly. The scene in thi
26、s picture is a case in point. Second, the government must enact legislation to punish those who commit traffic violation. For instance, jaywalkers could be asked to serve as traffic conductors. Other more serious offenders should be subject to financial penalties or serving jail time.To sum up, life
27、 is only once. We have to cherish our lives and should not risk them by not obeying traffic rules.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一个十字路口的情景，两条单行道上，四辆车各停一方，路口中间站着一名交通管理员。由于四辆车无路可走、无路可退，交通管理员也只能举手投降。可见遵守交通规则是十分重要的。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：违反交通规则会浪费时间，甚至引起事故。第二段提出个人看法：政府应采取措施提高人们遵守交通规则的意识。其一，应该开展宣传教育活动，说明不遵守交通规则的后果。其二，政府应该制定有关法律法规来惩治那些违反交通规则的人。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作
