1、12019 中考英语写作金编（6） （和参考范文）Passage-A(2018 吉林中考)书面表达。文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“Afterschool Activities Make My Life Colorful”为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。内容包括：1.你所参加的 12 项课外活动；2课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。写作要求：1.词数 90 左右；2文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。Afterschool Activities Make My Life ColorfulNowadays，afterschool activities are b
2、ecoming more and more popular.There are many different kinds of activities such as art and sports.I joined a volleyball club last year.I am used to playing volleyball after school.In the volleyball club，Ive made lots of friends.We often play volleyball after school.Whether it is hot or cold，we never
3、 stop playing it.I feel happy while playing volleyball.And it is also a good way to relax myself.I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.All in all，afterschool activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.Passage-B在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父
4、母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以 I Am Not a Child Any More 为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。 要求：1.请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，不少于 80 词； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算 I am not a child any more2_【参考范文】I am not a child any moreI have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak a
5、nd short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didnt know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They bot
6、h said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.” It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.Passage-C假如你校英语报七月份将开展“校园之星“（Star of the Campus）评选活动，请你根据图中的
7、信息，向校英语报写一篇短文，介绍你心目中“校园之星“康康的情况。3提示词：helpwith spare time get along with do housework要求：1文章内容符合题意，可参考所给提示词；2文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；3词数 100 左右（文章首段已给出，不计人总词数） Our school will select（挑选）“Star of the Campus（校园）“in JulyI think Kangkang is the most suitable one_【参考范文】At school，KangKang studies very hard at his
8、lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our classHe also loves sportsHe often plays football at weekends with his friendsWhats more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after classAt home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare timeBesides，K
9、angKang gets along well with his neighborsThis is why KangKang is so popularIn short，KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in needHe sets a good example for us 【解析】 Our school will select（挑选）“Star of the Campus（校园）“in JulyI think Kangkang is the most suitable one At
10、school，KangKang studies very hard at his lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our classHe also loves sportsHe often plays football at weekends with his friendsWhats more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after class 【高分句型】 （在学校的表现） At home，he likes
11、helping his mother do housework in his spare timeBesides，KangKang gets along well with his neighborsThis is why KangKang is so popular 【高分句型】 （在家的表现） In short，KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need 【高分句型】He sets a good example for us4这是一篇图画作文内容是介绍你心目中“校园之星“康康的
12、情况时态主要为一般现在时人称主要为第三人称 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 描述图画；在学校：康康学习努力，成绩好，爱足球，关心同学帮助同学 在家：帮助妈妈做家务，邻里关系好 常用到的重点短语： study hard 努力学习 whats more 再者 care for 照顾 help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 get along well with sb 与某人相处的好 【高分句型】 1Whats more，hecares for other students，so he alwayshelps them
13、 with their lessons after class whats more 再者 care for 照顾 help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 2This is why KangKang is so popular why 引导的从句和 is 构成系表结构 3In short，KangKang is an excellent student and heis always ready to help othersin need in short 简言之，做插入语 be ready to do sth 乐意做某事 in need 在危急中，做后置定语，修饰 others这是
14、一篇看图作文看图作文要注意一下几点（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节 （2）结合提示词，明确考查意图所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容，也是组成句子的必用材料有时还会给出起始句（这就给出了时态） ，学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，5联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了 （3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用 （5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等Passage-D根据表格中所给内容，用正确的格式设计一张海报(部分内
15、容已给出)。【参考范文】Juren Middle SchoolpresentsTeahouseby Lao SheThe story took place in old Beijing. Actors are all students from the school.At 8 : 00 pm tonightThe Peoples Theatre解析海报的格式：1. 活动的内容：Juren Middle School presents Teahouse by Lao She.（为了醒目，分成四行）时态：用一般现在时2. 海报内容：The story took place in old Beiji
16、ng. Actors are all students from the school.3. 活动时间：At 8 : 00 pm tonight举办单位 巨人中学剧名 茶馆作者 老舍海报内容 故事发生在旧北京。演员都是该校学生。时间 今晚 8 点地点 人民剧院64. 活动地点：The Peoples Theatre另外：Passage-E（注意: 文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不赋分）( A ) 6 月 1 日，张丽莉老师班级的学生组织召开了“为老师祈福”的主题班会，会后由你(张佳岩)代表班委会给老师发一封 E-mail。询问她的身体状况，表达感激与思念，并告诉她同学们一定会努力
17、学习，同时祝她早日康复。要求：字数 3050 词。Dear Ms Zhang,How are you?_ _Yours,Zhang Jiayan【参考范文】(A) One possible version:Dear Miss Zhang,How are you? We all miss you very much (1 分). Thank you for teaching us so well (1 分). Dont worry about us. We must try our best to study hard (1分). Are you feeling better now (1 分)
18、 ? We all hope youll get well soon (1 分).Yours,Zhang Jiayan ( B ) 今春我省部分地区发生干旱，水资源严重短缺。请你以 Saving Water 为题用英语写一篇短文。(参考词 tap 水龙头 reuse 再利用 recycle 再循环 drought 干旱)内容包括：1.水的重要性 2.人们浪费水的不良现象 3.提出几条建议要求：1.词数：80100 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。7Saving WaterAs we all know, water is important to us
19、all. 【参考范文】Saving WaterAs we all know, water is important to us all. People cant live without water. Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world.But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for
20、 a long time.Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, wed better recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead of having a shower.Water is really important to man. Lets save water from now on.Passage-F（居住环境） 根据要求完成短文写作。很多城市
21、都正在创建文明城市。文明城市的创建需要靠每个人的努力。 你在公共场所有没有看见一些不文明的行为呢？请你写一封倡议书，内容包括：1列举你在公共场所经常见到的两个不文明的行为；2提出文明准则，至少两条；3号召大家做文明人。作文要求：1不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2语句连贯，词数 80 个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Citizens，As we all know, our city is aiming at being a civilized one. Everybody should 8make an effort._Thank
22、you all.【参考范文】书面表达Dear Citizens，As we all know, our city is aiming at being a civilized one. Everybody should make an effort.However, some people still behave badly in public. For example, some people cut in line while getting on buses or getting into cinemas. Besides, some men often smoke in nonsmo
23、king areas in public. Its really bad for other peoples health. To make our city a better one, I think we should always obey the rules such as waiting in line while shopping and keep our mobile phones off during the meeting. Whats more, we should never litter in public.Lets try our best and be a civi
24、lized person, no matter wherever we are.Thank you all.Passage-G话题作文-人物介绍类(2018 原创题)假如你是李华，你从电视上了解到北京将成为 2022 年冬季奥运会的举办城市，你感到无比自豪和骄傲。现在请你用英文给奥委会写封简短的应聘信，介绍一下自己的情况(见下表)，表示愿意为奥运会做一些工作，请组委会给予考虑，并能尽早予以答复。提示：姓名 李华年龄 16爱好 绘画、体育、唱歌、演讲、英语口语9获奖情况2017 年 6 月获我市中学生英语演讲比赛一等奖联系方式 13062896686注意：1.内容须包含表格中提示的所有信息；2词
25、数：80100 词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；3文中不得出现真实的人名和所在学校的名称。Dear Sir/Madam，Im very happy that Beijing will host the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. I feel so proud that Id like to work as a volunteer for the Olympics. Now Im writing to tell you about my personal information.My name is Li Hua. Im sixteen. I have m
26、any hobbies, such as drawing, sports, singing, speeches, and spoken English. Besides，I won the first prize in our citys English Speech Contest for Middle School Student in June, 2017.If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, I will try my best to do this job well. Please reply to me soon. My telephone number is 13062896686. Yours sincerely，Li Hua10
