1、1写作之语言篇专项练习假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生 Sharon 在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1. 词数 120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve you
2、r Mandarin._ _2写作之语言篇专项练习参考答案【参考范文】Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it. I think Im fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for
3、me to communicate with others in my daily life. So Im quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well, you should spend much time practicing Mandarin every day. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read som
4、e books in Chinese, see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. Im eager to improve m
5、y English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. Hope for you early reply!Yours Sincerely Li Xia解析
6、：提纲作文首先要审题。即审要求、文体、人称、时态。其次抓中心，列要点。最后在体裁明确，中心突出、要点清晰的前提下选词组句，连句成篇。【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. 表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。【考点定位】考查提纲类作文。【妙招点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。3
