1、考研英语（应用文写作）-试卷 7 及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.You“ve been working for two years, and now you are planning to study in Sydney Universi
2、ty for an MBA degree. Write a letter to their International Students Admission Office to 1)introduce yourself briefly, and 2)enquire about enrollment requirements. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end o“f the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not w
3、rite the address.（分数：2.00）_4.Write a letter to the Office of Property Management of your community, to give your advice on how to improve community security. Write your letter with no less than 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do
4、 not write the address.（分数：2.00）_5.You have several experiences of buying books from Delta, an online bookstore, but the books were either delayed or damaged or something. Write a letter to the Customer Service of Delta to 1)file a complaint, and 2)make two or three suggestions. You should write abo
5、ut 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_6.You“ve been told that your best roommate Zhichao in senior high school, who is studying in US now, has been admitted to the Graduate College of Cornell Univ
6、ersity. Write a letter to congratulate him on it. You should write about 100 worts on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_考研英语（应用文写作）-试卷 7 答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing
7、（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.You“ve been working for two years, and now you are planning to study in Sydney University for an MBA degree. Write a letter to their International Students Admission Offi
8、ce to 1)introduce yourself briefly, and 2)enquire about enrollment requirements. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end o“f the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire a
9、bout the enrollment requirements for MBA courses in Sydney University. I have two-year working experience as an executive assistant in the marketing department of Unilever China. For further personal development, I would like to take MBA courses in one of the sufficiently qualified institutes, Sydne
10、y University in particular for its well-established reputation. May I have the honor of being given the specific information of your requirements of MBA applicants? Shall I make contact with you via the Internet in the first place? I“d appreciate the privilege of a timely reply. I may be reached by
11、the contact information in my resume. Faithfully, Li Ming Encl.: My resume.)解析：解析：作文要求以“李明”的名义写一封询问信。根据题目内容，考生已有 2 年工作经验，打算申请就读悉尼大学，特此写信询问相关招录信息。文章措辞应当礼貌谦逊，内容要全面周到。全文结构可以分为：开头点明写信目的；第二部分简要介绍自己的情况，表明申请原因，并询问有关信息；最后确认自己的联系方式，表明希望早日得到回复。4.Write a letter to the Office of Property Management of your comm
12、unity, to give your advice on how to improve community security. Write your letter with no less than 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Sir or Madam, I greatly appreciate this sur
13、vey organized by your Office. As a resident in this community, I am writing to contribute to the improvement of the community security. I commute to my downtown company from Monday to Friday. Most of the time, I am not at home. Therefore, it would be comforting if outsiders“ entrance to this communi
14、ty is strictly controlled. For example, security guards should ask outsiders to register and issue them with temporary entrance tags. I hope my advice would be of any help to your work and I am looking forward to seeing a safer community! Yours sincerely, Li Ming)解析：解析：这是一篇典型的“分析+建议”型作文要求考生向小区物业管理处写
15、一封信，为如何改善社区治安献计献策。文章结构力求清晰明了、重点突出。根据题目要求，信件应当在开头点明写信目的；接着从社区居民的角度为如何改善社区治安提出自己的具体建议；结尾握出希望建议能被采纳，同时对社区治安进行展望。5.You have several experiences of buying books from Delta, an online bookstore, but the books were either delayed or damaged or something. Write a letter to the Customer Service of Delta to 1
16、)file a complaint, and 2)make two or three suggestions. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Sir or Madam, I really need your help with this. I have been buyi
17、ng books from Delta for nearly 8 years, but recently the books sent to me were either delayed or damaged. As one of your reliable buyers, I am terribly disappointed. Here are my two suggestions. More options for express delivery should be offered, that is, we customers can choose the most suitable d
18、elivery method ourselves. Sometimes, what we care more is not the fees charged but the time taken. Another suggestion is that you take more effective ways to protect your products, such as filling more sponge in the gaps and using harder wrappers. I“d be more than grateful if those unhappy experienc
19、es would never happen again. I greatly appreciate your help. Yours faithfully, Li Ming)解析：解析：作文要求考生向某网上书店写一封投诉信，指出购买图书过程中发现的问题，并提出相应建议。文章结构力求清晰明了、重点突出。根据题目要求，信件应当在开头点明写信目的，即阐明购买商品过程中发现的主要问题；接着提出解决问题的具体建议；结尾表达写信人的期待：这样的问题不再发生。并表示感谢。6.You“ve been told that your best roommate Zhichao in senior high sch
20、ool, who is studying in US now, has been admitted to the Graduate College of Cornell University. Write a letter to congratulate him on it. You should write about 100 worts on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）
21、_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Zhichao, Congratulations on your being admitted to the Graduate College of Cornell University! Are you going further studies in the same field as you“ve been taking up in the undergraduate years? It has been nearly four years since we met last time at the graduation ceremony. Will
22、you be back during this summer vacation? You know, Facebook could never compare with a face-to-face chat. I still have a vivid recollection of the days when we studied and lived in the same dorm and you were always the best joke-teller. Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Congratulations and all best wishes for an even more prosperous future! Yours truly, Li Ming)解析：解析：这是一封祝贺信。在得知高中最好的室友被国外某大学录取后，向其表示祝贺。信件开头应表明写信的目的；接着阐述对过去的美好回忆以及对室友的惦记；最后再次表示祝贺和祝愿。
