1、专业英语四级（作文）-试卷126及答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_2.Fake products are very harmful, but they still enjoy great popularity. They have brought about a lot of social problems. Why can they get so widespread? What harmfulness can they bring to people? How to s
2、olve the problem? Choose one or two aspects to talk about. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Harmfulness of Fake Products Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may
3、 result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_3.Man-made beauty is a new word that have appeared in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by various operations. How do you comment on this phenomenon? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My View on Man-ma
4、de Beauty Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_4.With the development of society, more and more ordinary people are engaged in charity activities. Accordin
5、gly, a new form of charity comes into being, that is, micro-charity, in which ordinary people can take actions or donate small amounts of money to express their kindness. What is your view on micro-charity? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My View on Micro-charity Marks
6、 will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_5.A phenomenon emerges that an increasing number of on-job people, especially those in their 20s or early 30s, return to un
7、iversity out of various reasons. Some people return to school in the hope of temporarily avoiding pressures from current work and life, while others intend to grasp the golden opportunity for self-advancement before it is too late. What do you think of the phenomenon? Write a composition of about 20
8、0 words on the following topic: Back to School for Self-improvement or Shelter? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_6.Some students in university enjoy pr
9、ivilege, for example, student-athletes could pass the examinations with lower grades; members of the choir could survive the test with poor classroom attendance. Do you agree or disagree with the privilege enjoyed by the special group of students? Write a composition of about 200 words on the follow
10、ing topic: Are the Privileged Students on Campus Acceptable? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_专业英语四级（作文）-试卷126答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，
11、分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Fake products are very harmful, but they still enjoy great popularity. They have brought about a lot of social problems. Why can they get so widespread? What harmfulness can they bring to people? How to solve the problem? Choose one or two aspects to talk abo
12、ut. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Harmfulness of Fake Products Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： The Ha
13、rmfulness of Fake Products Nowadays, China is suffering from the boom of fake commodities. Fake products are so widespread in the market that almost everybody has the frustrating experiences of buying them. Then, what harm do they bring to us? On the one hand, fake products do harm to individual con
14、sumers. They can bring about great loss in both properties and lives. For example, bad seeds result in bankruptcy of farmers. And another case in point is that if a consumer buys fake medicine, it wont cure him of his illness but may threaten his life. On the other hand, the production of fake commo
15、dities is a great danger to our society in many ways. Firstly, the good reputation of a well-known product may be ruined overnight by fake product. Secondly, fake products, usually associated with organized crime and backed up by powerful multilayered corrupted bureaucrats, may cause chaos and ruin
16、our society. Since fake products do great harm to individual consumers and to our society, it is high time that we did something to avoid being the victims of fake goods. Every one of us has the duty to fight against fake products.)解析：解析： 本题是一个给定观点型题目。题目把假冒产品的害处作为话题，要求考生从为什么假冒产品如此盛行、假冒产品给人们带来了什么害处以及
17、怎样解决这一问题三个方面中选取一个或两个展开分析，提出自己的观点，然后进行论证。 本题是当前的一个热点话题，可以有多种思路，既可以把现在的假冒产品盛行当作结果，分析其成因；也可以分析假冒产品的现状，着重研究其对社会产生的影响，指出其严峻性；或者从解决问题的角度，分析如何杜绝假冒产品。根据题目给出的三个问题，这里给出了三种思路供参考，考生可以选取其中之一来进行写作： 思路1：出现假冒产品的原因。 出现假冒产品的原因是多方面的。可以从以下几个方面分析：假冒产品给生产者和不法商贩带来极大的利润空间；消费者贪图便宜的心理等。 思路2：假冒产品盛行的严重后果。 假冒产品危害消费者的权益，甚至生命；假冒产
18、品侵害了合法生产者的权益；假冒产品危害社会，造成社会混乱。 思路3：如何杜绝假冒产品。 消费者要杜绝贪便宜的心理，营造出良好的消费环境；全社会动员起来坚决抵制假冒产品；政府出台严厉的制裁措施与相关法律、法规，使造假者望而却步。 范文采用了思路2，着重讨论假冒产品带来的严重后果。3.Man-made beauty is a new word that have appeared in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by various operations. How do you commen
19、t on this phenomenon? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My View on Man-made Beauty Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(
20、正确答案： My View on Man-made Beauty The desire for a beautiful appearance is one of human natures. The plastic surgery may really mean something to some people. At least they become more beautiful. But every coin has its two sides, and so does the man-made beauty practice for the following reasons. Fir
21、stly, ones appearance is Gods blessing. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, many of them are also diagnosed with mammary gland disease. The more serious problem is that they risk being unable to breast feed. Secondly, advocating such a practice will mislead
22、 people to false judgment of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc. , which should be the real mainstream of our aesthetic taste. The practice of man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop correct conce
23、pt of beauty. Concerning the above possible harm the practice may bring about, I am strongly against it and advocate true and natural beauty. Besides, people, especially women, should pay more attention to the cultivation of their inner beauty since the inner beauty outweighs the external beauty in
24、the long run.)解析：解析： 本题是一个自由发挥型题目，要求考生就社会上出现越来越多的人造美女这一现象陈述自己的观点。整容作为一个新兴产业，正在得到越来越多人的青睐，特别是年轻女性。这个话题可以从两个方面人手： 思路1：支持整容。 爱美之心人皆有之，整容无可厚非。更何况美丽自己，愉悦他人，既是礼貌的一部分，也是自我的一种体现。整容的产生和发展是医学进步的产物，也是当社会稳定、物质生活在很大程度上得到满足之后的精神层面的追求。 思路2：不支持整容。 整容是对美丽的误解。真正的美应该是内在美，来自于良好的自身修养，以及高尚的道德品质。过分注重外表会让人忽略对内在美的追求。整容也会带来许
25、多直接的恶果，比如隆胸手术易使女性患乳腺癌等。 范文主要采纳了思路2进行写作。4.With the development of society, more and more ordinary people are engaged in charity activities. Accordingly, a new form of charity comes into being, that is, micro-charity, in which ordinary people can take actions or donate small amounts of money to expres
26、s their kindness. What is your view on micro-charity? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My View on Micro-charity Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a
27、loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： My View on Micro-charity With the improvement of society and peoples living standard, more and more ordinary people are engaged in a new form of charitymicro-charity, which wins overwhelming support and benefits a lot of people. Micro-charity has emerged as a shin
28、ing star in charity activities. It encourages ordinary people to explore those small demands of other people which are easily ignored. Besides, compared with the traditional form of charity, micro-charity is totally grassroot charity which relies on ordinary people. Furthermore, micro-charity not on
29、ly encourages people to find others demands but also involves themselves in charity to express their love and kindness. Under these new concepts, it has its own advantages. Firstly, it is quite a convenient and easy way for people to involve in charity since it lowers the threshold for charitable pa
30、rticipation. Secondly, micro-charity can draw a lot of attention through microblog and other net platforms. Online charity information can be disseminated rapidly and widely. Lastly, it can stir up impressive resources to solve problems, which makes charity sustainable. All these advantages make it
31、possible to get people together, and, as a group, they can help others more easily and finally help our society make progress. To sum up, with its specific concepts and obvious advantages, micro-charity makes people see how easily they can strengthen their own personal values through performing good
32、 deeds instead of considering charitable work as reserved for the rich. In a word, micro-charity will surely help to make a better world.)解析：解析： 本题是自由发挥型题目，要求考生就当前很受关注的微公益问题发表自己的看法。过去，人们似乎已经默认了这样一个事实：所谓公益、慈善只是富人的事业，而普通人却与公益“绝缘”。但是随着社会的进步和人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的普通人开始参与到公益事业中来，于是“微公益”应运而生。题目要求考生对微公益提出自己的看法，可以
33、从以下两方面对微公益的问题进行探讨。 微公益的理念：1鼓励人们发掘身边微小的社会需求；2微公益和普通公益相比，更加依赖普通民众，吸引更多人关注身边的公益，汇聚的是草根的“微力量”；3鼓励人人参与，传递爱心，付诸行动。 微公益的优点：1微公益方便、简单、易参与；2借助网络平台倡导微公益，能吸引更多的人关注、参与；3参与者众多，不但可以发挥更多的智慧，而且可以持续发展一项公益活动。 范文结合了微公益的理念和微公益的优点来进行论述。5.A phenomenon emerges that an increasing number of on-job people, especially those i
34、n their 20s or early 30s, return to university out of various reasons. Some people return to school in the hope of temporarily avoiding pressures from current work and life, while others intend to grasp the golden opportunity for self-advancement before it is too late. What do you think of the pheno
35、menon? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Back to School for Self-improvement or Shelter? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_
36、正确答案：(正确答案： Back to School for Self-improvement or Shelter? Now, a popular trend of on-job people returning to university has aroused peoples concern. Some return to school with an aim to shelter from pressures, while others desire for self-improvement. From my perspective, I firmly agree with the l
37、atter. Firstly, people should return to university to gain special skills that are more career-oriented. Having been working over a span of years, they know better which capacities and professional skills they are deficient in. Whats more, they may return to get the diploma and advanced knowledge th
38、at will contribute to pay rise, promotion, new employment or career hopping. Additionally, they can make acquaintance with more elites. Students with perceptive insight can exchange views and optimize their resources available. While those who return to university to shelter from burden should face
39、reality for reasons below. First, it is a waste of time and money to wander in campus without concrete goals. If they devote to their jobs, they will gain greater achievements and profits. Moreover, they are likely to miss opportunities of promotion or work training. In addition, since they will be
40、confronted with pressures again in the near future, it is useless and even risky to consider university as an ivory tower. In view of the discussion above, on-job people should return to university for self-improvement rather than for shelter.)解析：解析： 本题是一个观点选择型题目。论证观点时不必局限于一种思路，避免偏激和跑题；可采用反面例证，这样更有说
41、服力。 思路1：重返校园是为了提升个人能力。 可以从提升个人能力的角度出发，以积极的态度对待在职人员重返校园的现象。他们可以通过再次学习书本知识弥补工作中的不足，有针对性的学习效率更高。与此同时，还可以拓展人脉，提高学历。因此，重返校园值得鼓励。 思路2：重返校园的利弊因人而异。 有些人重返校园的目的是加强专业知识的学习，但有些人是为了逃避社会中的残酷竞争。出于此种考虑，应从两个不同方面进行对比分析，最终鼓励人们为了学习重返校园。 范文论证部分从两方面对比展开，肯定了为学习重返校园的积极意义，阐释为逃避竞争而重返校园的消极影响，结论部分重申观点：支持人们为提升能力重返校园。6.Some stu
42、dents in university enjoy privilege, for example, student-athletes could pass the examinations with lower grades; members of the choir could survive the test with poor classroom attendance. Do you agree or disagree with the privilege enjoyed by the special group of students? Write a composition of a
43、bout 200 words on the following topic: Are the Privileged Students on Campus Acceptable? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Are the Privilege
44、d Students on Campus Acceptable? With the popularization of quality-oriented education, college students can develop their interests and hobbies more freely. Amateur athletes, singers and hosts become the second identities to many students, who are entitled to special consideration in their studies.
45、 They can pass examinations with much lower scores. So some people say that it is not right to allow privileged students on campus. However, I dont agree with them. There are many reasons why I hold no confidence in them, and I would explore only a few here. The main reason why I agree with privileg
46、e should be enjoyed by some students is that it is more difficult for students to be all-round in the face of the rich and fast-paced life, and that exam scores no longer play a key role in evaluating the achievement of college students. So schools cannot ask students to be good at both their studies and extra-curricular activitie
