1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 34 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Success and Persistence Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) gi
2、ve your comments. 2 Be Tolerant of Yourself But Strict with Others? Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 3 Lets Be Ready to Help Others! Write an essay of 160-200 w
3、ords based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 4 How to Measure an Excellent Person? Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2)
4、explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 5 Dad, Give Me Money Once More Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 34 答案与解析Part BDirections:
5、Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 In the picture, there are two miners. The one on the top is digging his way into a mine full of diamonds; the one at the bottom is actually giving up his endeavor, but just one step away from the treasure. The me
6、ssage implied in this picture is about the secret to success, which is persistence. Had the miner at the bottom persisted in his efforts a little bit longer, he would have been able to claim the enormous wealth.In my opinion, perseverance is indeed a proven way to success. But its a pity that we alw
7、ays easily get frustrated or desperate halfway because of difficulties and setbacks along the way. And we often abandon our goals prematurely, without doing our best. If, however, we stick to our goals, success is actually not very far away. For example, J. K. Rowling was impoverished when she was c
8、omposing Harry Potter. She did not give up. Instead, she put all her energy into the only thing she lovedwriting. Her persistence now rewards her with fame and wealth.From what has been discussed above, I think we must persist in our efforts if we want to be successful.【试题解析】 这幅图片是一组对比图，上下分别是两个矿工。一个
9、正在往钻石矿里面挖，另一个却离成功只差一点点就放弃了。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：向读者传递“成功之道贵在坚持”的道理。第二段提出个人看法：坚持是成功之道。举罗琳的例子，阐述定下目标然后为之不懈奋斗的重要性。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作2 【正确答案】 There are two cats in the picture and they resemble each other except the expression: the left one opens its eyes with no focus when looking
10、at its own weak points; while the right one opens its eyes wide with full attention when looking at others shortcomings. With the sharp contrast, the picture intends to convey a meaningful message to its readers: some of us are tolerant of our own faults, but intolerant of those of others. This is w
11、ell represented by the two different expressions of the cats accordingly.Actually, such a double-standard mindset is not uncommon among us. Some people just pay little attention to their own mistakes, but they would criticize others ruthlessly. This attitude is not helpful, I think, to improve ourse
12、lves or to forge a solid relationship with people around us. By turning a blind eye to our own disadvantages, we lose the opportunity to become a better person. Besides, the unfair double-standard treatment would anger our friends and colleagues, who might choose to keep a distance from us.Therefore
13、, I think it is wise for us to face up to our own weaknesses and treat others fairly.【试题解析】 这幅图片对比了两只猫在看待自己的缺点和别人的缺点时的不同反应，旨在指出“宽于律己，严于待人”这种不良现象。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：引起读者对“宽于律己，严于待人”现象的注意。第二段讨论“宽于律己，严于待人”带来的两个不好后果。其一，错失让自己不断进步的机会。其二，“双重标准”待人不公，会使朋友和同事对我们疏远。第三段提出建议。【知识模块】 大作文写作3 【
14、正确答案】 In the picture, a young man is supporting an elderly man, who uses a walking stick, with his hands. Faced with the help of the young man, the elderly man wears a smile with satisfaction on his face. In correspondence to the two men, the sun shows a heart-shaped appearance and is shining in all
15、 its splendid beauty. It is clear that the picture wants to send its readers a message: we should give a helping hand to those in need and spread the warmth in society. This is a very beneficial act that will narrow the distance between each other and make the world full of love.In my opinion, what
16、the picture conveys is particularly meaningful in an increasingly materialistic world, where interpersonal relationships are troubled by doubts and mistrust. If we are able to restore the confidence between each other by helping others out, I think the society we live in will be full of positive ene
17、rgy, and we will be happier and more satisfied.In conclusion, it is advisable for us to be ready to help others. This would make you and the person you help happier!【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了年轻人帮助老年人的情况，传达了一种助人为乐的精神。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片所传达的内在含义。第二段发表个人看法，指出助人为乐在现代社会的作用。第三段作总结：助人为乐更快乐。【知识模块】 大作
18、文写作4 【正确答案】 In the picture, a man has passed a lot of tests: political qualities, social morality, work ethics, family virtues and individual virtues. He is proudly holding a piece of paper in hand, which says: “Of talent and virtue, virtue comes first“. This picture intends to tell its readers that
19、 virtues are more important than skills or talents one possesses.As far as I am concerned, virtues mean more to me than talents. First, talented people without moral integrity are actually dangerous. For instance, some hackers, albeit with excellent computer skills, show no concern for other people
20、and the social order. They become a constant threat to the Internet users and often disrupt the orderly online community. Second, virtuous people are the most valuable assets in our society. They will apply their talents to make contribution to the society, benefiting everyone around them.In short,
21、one should try hard to become outstanding in both talent and virtue. However, for the sake of common good, we should remember that virtue comes first.【试题解析】 这幅图画了一名男士通过了各种各样的考试，是名副其实的人才。从图中的文字看出，该图强调人才应该“以德为先”，德行比才干更重要。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下：第一段捕绘图片，指出图片的意图：人才应该是既有才华，又有美德，但是两者相比之下，应“以德为先”。第二段提出个人看
22、法：品德比才干更重要。其一，有才无德的人实际上很危险，以黑客为例加以说明。其二，有道德的人能够运用自己的才干为社会做贡献。第三段总结全文：我们都应努力成为德才兼备的人，但应时刻谨记以德为先。【知识模块】 大作文写作5 【正确答案】 In the picture, a kid wants to get some money from his departed father, so he is trying to put his hand into the pocket of his deceased fathers portrait. The seemingly absurd picture i
23、mplies that some kids are accustomed to asking their parents for money and not able to support themselves. As the picture shows, parents could not serve as a financial source for the entirety of childrens life.In my opinion, parents should train their kids to manage their financial status, so that t
24、hey can be more responsible for their own life. For instance, when parents want to give some pocket money to their children, they had better assign a certain task for them to accomplish. Pocket money is then earned by, not given to, the children. Bit by bit, children would not take pocket money for
25、granted and would understand that “no pain, no gain“.In conclusion, in order to make children stand on their own feet in the future, parents should teach them not to rely on others.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一个孩子习惯了问父亲要钱、想从父亲的遗照口袋上取钱的情景。可见，一些孩子习惯了向家长无限索取，离开父母就无所适从。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：指出那些习惯问父母要钱的小孩无法真正独立。第二段提出个人看法：父母应适当引导孩子通过劳动来换取报酬，而不是不假思索就把钱给孩子。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作
