1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 69 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comm
2、ents. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.(20 points) 2 Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 poi
3、nts) 3 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly. 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) 4 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the foll
4、owing drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 69 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20
5、points)1 【正确答案】 Here is a picture, interesting but with deep implication. As is vividly depicted in the photo, four persons are having dinner. If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that they all focus on their own phone and do not have communication. Obviously, what the drawing s
6、ubtly conveys should be given more concern.What might account for the problem conveyed in the picture? Theoretically, several reasons may trigger it, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance. On the top of the list is that people are dependent too much on their mobile phone and ov
7、erlook the face-to-face communication. There is another point that no one can ignore. It is widely admitted that the young men have got used to this kind of “invisible communication“, which may make them feel safe. This also causes their unwillingness of direct communication.According to the analysi
8、s above, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend. Of all the steps, to appeal to the media s publicity may be the most effective one, which can make the public treat their mobile phones in a reasonable way. Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright fut
9、ure.【试题解析】 本文严格按照题目说明，首段简要地阐述图画内容，第二段揭示了图画包含的深层寓意，末段给出了自己的看法，感情真挚细腻，并能从孝顺的观点最后升华到和谐社会。全文紧扣主题，准确达意，词汇丰富，句式多变，是一篇不错的范文。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 The cartoon consists of two pictures. The left one shows that a young mother was holding her little daughters hand 30 years ago. The right one portrays the current
10、 situation, that mother has become old and the daughter, who has grown up to be a young lady, is supporting her mother by her arm.This cartoon is thought-provoking and touching. The cartoonist wants to remind people that when we are young, our parents care for us and devote much of their time and en
11、ergy. For children, parents are our strongest support. As we grow up, parents get old and are no longer strong enough. It is time we support and accompany them so that we can pay their love back.In my opinion, filial piety has always been the fine tradition in China. We have been told since childhoo
12、d to respect the seniority, especially our parents who bring us up. With parents love we can grow up safe and sound. That is why we should let them feel our love and gratitude and live a happy life. Moreover, by creating more happy families we can contribute to the formation of a harmonious society.
13、【试题解析】 本文为三段式。第一段介绍图画所表达的信息点，并提出一个问题“哪一个更重要”，引发思考。第二段给出产生多样化选择的原因，以及重要的选择决定着一个人的成功。第三段得出结论：结合自己的实际情况与个人的人生追求与目标，做出正确的适合自己的选择。文章结构清晰，紧紧围绕话题展开，语言精彩，论证有力。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案】 As is shown in the above cartoon, many graduate students will have to face the problem of diverse choices, such as hunting for a
14、job, studying abroad, starting a business or taking the postgraduate entrance exam. Before they choose, which one does matter most? This picture with the caption of choice gives me a lot of reflection.Undoubtedly, the cartoonist intends to give us such an explanation: without exception, everyone has
15、 to make choices in life. And there is enough evidence suggesting that choices are often directly related to one s success. For instance, under the influence of the global economic crisis, graduate students are confronted with increasing challenges and fierce competition, which for them, are also pr
16、ecious choices. And which one they choose probably indicates the lifestyle they are going to have in the forthcoming years.From my perspective, in order to make the proper choice, we are supposed to take self-evaluation and other subsistent factors into consideration. Only in this way can we realize
17、 our goal and embrace a brighter future.【试题解析】 本文首段描述漫画内容，第二段指出漫画的寓意两种人代表两种不同的生活态度，第三段用比喻论述作者的观点，并提出建议。文章层次清晰，构思严谨，内容丰富，论述有力。语言生动形象，句式变化多端，选词恰当、词汇丰富。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【正确答案】 This picture depicts that a bottle has fallen down to the ground, with almost half of the liquid spilling out. Two men are on the s
18、cene, one being still happy, saying “How lucky it is that there is some left“. However, the other man becomes frustrated, lamenting “Its all over and hopeless“ with his face covered by one hand.The man on the left stands for those who are pessimistic when facing troubles, and under such circumstance
19、s all they are able to see is misery and the negative side. The man on the right is a representative of the optimists, who always sense the brightness through the dark and take the initiative to penetrate a way out when in difficulties.In my view, we should avoid the left man s thinking pattern. Eve
20、ry rose has its thorns and life is filled with tons of possible troubles. If we succumbed to our weak mental situation, then we are destined to fail and may never resurrect. Only by focusing ourself on the positive side can we acquire firmness, strength, and happiness.【试题解析】 本文共分两段。第一段简述了这一社会现象的普遍性。接着以图画为例，具体勾勒出人物的动作以及背景所反映出的信息。同时，指出了经济发展与环境污染之间的关系，从而引出第二段的内容。第二段提出了解决问题的途径，末句设想途径落实后的效果。全文使用了大量精彩词汇与短语，不定式的被动语态与主动语态交替使用，倒装、省略、非谓语动词以及各种从句的运用，使得全文语句变化多端、摇曳生姿。【知识模块】 短文写作
