1、模块主题写作一,Module 1 Travel,模块主题写作一,Module 1 Travel,话题分析,本模块的话题是描述旅游生活。在写这类短文时，文中要写明旅行的时间、地点、人物以及去旅行的方式。文中应主要谈论旅行的经过，参观了哪些景点、让自己难忘的是什么、对这次旅行的感想等。,典型例题,假如你是王林，4月15日你参加了学校组织的水浒城旅游活动。请以“My Day in Shuihu Town”为题，写出当天的经历。 内容提示： 1充当义务小导游，向外国游客介绍水浒文化； 2协助水浒城的管理人员，制止游客不文明的行为； 3帮助走失的孩子找到家人。,注意： 1参考有关内容提示，也可以适当发挥
2、。 2词数：100词左右(首句已给出，不计入总词数)。 My Day in Shuihu TownToday is April 15th._ _ _ _,思路点拨,素材积累,短语：1.参加_ 2景点_ 3一个走失的孩子_ 4introduce Shuihu culture_ 5throw litter here and there_ 6put ones heart into_,take part in,scenery spots,a lost child,介绍水浒文化,到处丢垃圾,全身心投入,句型：1. How was your holiday?Not bad! 2The train was
3、full of people. 3We flew direct to Shanghai. 4What a wonderful experience we had! 5We had quite a good time in Beijing.,高分模板,My Day in Shuihu Town Today is April 15th. My classmates and I took part in the tour to Shuihu Town. It was organized by our school. Shuihu Town is one of the most beautiful s
4、cenery spots. It attracts a lot of tourists to come every year, including many foreign tourists from different countries. I volunteered as a guide to introduce Shuihu culture to some foreigners. They were very happy. I think protecting its environment is also very important. So I helped the manager
5、to stop uncivilized behaviours, for example, telling the tourists not to throw litter here and there. There were many tourists today. A couple put their hearts into the beautiful scenery so that their child was lost. At last, I helped the lost child to find his parents. It was a busy and tiring day
6、but I was very happy.,名师点评,叙述“参加旅游活动”使用一般过去时(包括当天的经历)，语法使用准确。 “one ofthe形容词最高级名词复数”句式强调了水浒城的旅游地位。 including为现在分词作定语，修饰tourists，起了补充说明的作用。 “I think”引导的宾语从句表达了自己的环保意识。 使用so that引导的结果状语从句，语法准确、语境合理。,小试身手,假如你叫李华，是某中学初三学生。你计划毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向他询问。 1考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行； 2计划在英格兰待十天
7、左右； 3向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯； 4请他就英格兰的名胜给出建议。 注意：1.信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数； 2词数：80词左右。,Dear Ben， How is everything? _ _ _ _ _ I am looking forward to your reply. Yours truly， Li Hua,One possible version： Dear Ben， How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. Well
8、 stay there for about ten days. But I dont know much about it. I hope that you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours truly， Li Hua,
