1、写作之语言篇,On the Way to School,These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school.,现在分词短语 作状语,动名词短语 作主语,On the W
2、ay to School,I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bike, Ill always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, Ill never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.,条件状语从句,时间状语从句,On the Way to School,Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty
3、 to help keep our environment clean and neat. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.,it 用作形式宾语, 不定式作真正宾语,倒装句式,长 短 结 合,句 式 灵 活,情 态 虚 拟,介 连 交 错,非 谓 连 篇,达 人 是 我,写 作 高 分 技 巧,运用
4、非谓语动词转换简单句,1,利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换,使其成为较高级的表达方式。, I feel quite sorry for that. I begin to think about what to do to help., I feel quite sorry for that. I begin to think about what to do to help.让句 作主句,用非谓语动词改写句 。,句 表示原因,其动词 feel 与主语 I 之间为主谓关系,故用现在分词短语作原因状语。Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think a
5、bout what to do to help.,运用非谓语动词转换复合句,2,用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些,因为需转换的一般是从句部分,这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词,再把握好时态和语态即可,所以只需两步。,After we had practiced playing football for almost two months,we strongly desired to be the winner.,Having practiced playing football for almost two months,we strongly desired to be the w
6、inner.,1The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words. 2They read “Happy Teachers Day!” 3Mr. Lee walked into the classroom. 4He was surprised to find we were standing in line. 5We were clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers Day!” 6Li Hua, our monitor, presented him with the prepared fl
7、owers. 7Some girls sang songs for Mr. Lee.,The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers Day!”Walking into the classroom, Mr. Lee was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers Day!”Li Hua, our monitor, presented Mr. L
8、ee with the prepared flowers while some girls sang songs for her.,Mr. Lee, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day : He did not receive a single greeting card from us students. However, he would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for him.As Teachers Day was ap
9、proaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On the afternoon of September 10, some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words
10、, which read “Happy Teachers Day!”,Walking into the classroom, Mr. Lee was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers Day!” Li Hua, our monitor, presented Mr. Lee with the prepared flowers. Some of the girls sang songs for him, and three boys read a poem intended for him. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Mr. Lee.Mr. Lee spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank him enough for all his hard work and guidance.,Have fun!,