1、考研英语(写作)模拟试卷 91 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Students Self-care Ability Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3)
2、 give your comments. 2 Be a Civic-minded Tourist Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 3 Cherish Food Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your e
3、ssay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 4 Never Give Up Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments.
4、 5 Do You Want Others to Know Your Well-doing? Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 考研英语(写作)模拟试卷 91 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on
5、the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 In the picture, a student is featured in a dorm room. He is calling his mother, asking for instructions to wash his socks. The intended message of this picture is about students poor ability of taking care of themselves, a problem quite prevalent in Chi
6、na today.In my view, both students and their parents should take the blame for their inability to take care of themselves. For one thing, some students take everything in their life for granted. They think it is their parents job to feed them, clothe them and even clean their messes. That is why the
7、y do not bother to learn some basic life skills. For another thing, the indulgence of parents encourages the laziness of their kids. Some parents go to extremes to micro-control every little detail of their kids. They even discourage their kids to make efforts to live an independent life. In their m
8、inds, children are always the little kids who need constant love and care.In short, to help children become independent and capable, parents should loose control on their children, while children should learn to take some responsibilities for themselves.【试题解析】 这幅图片描绘了一名学生在宿舍里打电话给妈妈,询问如何洗袜子。可见,这名学生无法
9、自理,基本的日常洗涮也要向家里人请教。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:第一段描绘图片,指出图片的内在含义:学生的自理能力差。第二段提出个人看法,指出学生的自理能力差是自己和父母共同造成的。其一,学生认为父母包办生活中的一切是理所当然的,懒于训练自己独立生活的能力。其二,父母的溺爱纵容了孩子的懒惰,使孩子缺乏锻炼机会。第三段作出总结:父母不要凡事都代办,学生要学会有所担当。【知识模块】 大作文写作2 【正确答案】 In the picture, two tourists are enjoying themselves in a scenic spot. Ignoring the
10、 sign of “keep the environment clean“, they smoke, throw wine bottles, leftover food and garbage around. One of them even claims: “We have paid; we are the gods here.“ This picture draws readers attention to some tourists hideous behavior, which should be condemned.As far as I am concerned, the gove
11、rnment must take some measures to eliminate the uncivilized conduct in scenic spots. To begin with, a system should be set up to record those who misbehave in scenic spots. If they get the record for more than three times, they should be blacklisted and refused to go to any scenic spot ever since. I
12、n addition, the authorities concerned should impose a fine on those who destroy the environment. Last but not least, people can take photos of those who are misbehaving in scenic spots, and expose their behavior online to make them feel ashamed.In short, misbehavior in scenic spots should be deplore
13、d, and stringent measures should be adopted to deter those uninhibited tourists.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了两名游客在景区里乱扔垃圾破坏环境的行为。从图中文字看出,游客的行为和观点不可理喻,应制止其行为并对其进行必要的教育。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:第一段描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:一些游客的不文明行为应该受到谴责。第二段提出建议:政府应该采取一些措施来应对这一问题。其一,建立一个备案体系记录那些在景区内行为不端的游客。其二,有关当局要对那些破坏景区环境的游客予以罚款。其三,公众可拍照暴光游
14、客的不文明行为。第三段总结全文:景区里的不良行为应该受到谴责,我们应该采取严厉的措施来阻吓那些“放荡不羁”的游客。【知识模块】 大作文写作3 【正确答案】 In the picture, a chef is featured. He is pouring leftovers out from a bucket into a basin. There are some words that read: “The national total amount of leftovers discarded in the restaurant every year is 50 billion RMB“.
15、 This picture sends a strong message to its readers: we must cherish food.As I see it, the importance of cherishing food needs to be stressed, especially when we are a bit better off than we were years ago. Some people never come across experiences like famine or food scarcity. Thus, they do not go
16、along with the idea of keeping leftovers, thinking that only the poor will do that. My father told me what it was like when he was starving at the age of 7. At that time, he was only allowed to eat a morsel of food for every meal, resulting in his constant hunger. Although he is better off now, he n
17、ever throws away any leftover food and always tries to prepare the right amount of food for the family.Every single grain is the result of toil. Therefore, we should value even a grain of rice by following my fathers example, and set a good example for our children.【试题解析】 这幅图刻画了一名厨师把剩菜倒掉的情景。从图中数字可见,
18、我国的粮食浪费很严重,需引起我们的重视。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:第一段描绘图片,转述图片中的文字,并指出图片的意图:我们不应把获得食物看成理所当然,应该珍惜食物。第二段提出个人看法:我们应强调珍惜食物的重要性,尤其是在现在的生活比以前好的时候,并以父亲的做法为例加以说明。第三段提出建议:建议效仿父亲珍惜粮食的做法,为下一代树立榜样。【知识模块】 大作文写作4 【正确答案】 In the picture, three wheel-chaired racers are featured. Behind them, three tracks extend into far
19、distance and form a heart shape. Inside the heart shape shows the logo of the Beijing 2008 Paralympics Games. This picture vividly conveys an inspiring message: we must never give up. Just like those racers, we should never quit and never stop pursuing excellence, whether we are on our own feet or i
20、n a wheel chair.There is no doubt that life isnt a bed of roses. However, the never-give-up spirit would make us do our utmost when we confront difficulties and challenges, and encourage us to constantly pursue excellence. Moreover, it would lead us to the way of success. Without the spirit, we migh
21、t easily quit halfway and hardly have any achievement. It is such spirit that would arm us with great courage, self-confidence, determination, and persistence, which would help us overcome difficulties and get the fruit of success eventually.In short, no matter what difficulties may come to us, we s
22、hould never give up and never abandon our hope.【试题解析】 这幅图描绘了 2008 年北京残奥会上三名轮椅选手赛跑的情况。他们奋力向前,其不言弃的拼搏精神很鼓舞人心。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:第一段描绘图片,指出图片的内在含义:我们要学习那些比赛选手永不放弃、追求卓越的精神。第二段展开论述永不放弃的重要性。其一,永不言弃让我们拼尽全力,追求卓越。其二,永不言弃才能获得成功。第三段总结全文:我们要有永不言弃的精神,永不放弃希望。【知识模块】 大作文写作5 【正确答案】 In the picture, a man is ask
23、ing another man for help. The man asked says that he is willing to help, but on the condition that his good deeds must be made publicly known. This picture, in its simple yet insightful way, draws our attention to the issue that some people help others for fame.For my part, undisguised efforts to ma
24、ke one famous through helping others should be condemned. First, being vulnerable and in a disadvantageous position, people in need might feel more miserable when they are exposed to the public. For instance, if a lady seeks help for domestic violence, it is very unreasonable to offer our help in re
25、turn for a publicity stunt. Second, seeking fame by means of doing good deeds is hypocritical and disgusting. It should be peoples kindness and benevolence that make them willing to help others out, so that those who receive the help would feel the warmth and continue to spread the kindness when the
26、re is a need to offer a helping hand.To sum up, we should be sincere in our wish to help those in need and giving publicity to ourselves by helping others should be deplored.【试题解析】 这幅图刻画了一位施助者向求助者讨价还价的情景。该男士提出只有满足了“宣传善举”的条件,才会愿意伸出援手。图片实际上讽刺了那些带着功利目的向别人伸出援手的伪善行为。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:第一段描绘图片,指出一些人通过帮助别人来获取名声的伪善行为。第二段提出个人看法:通过帮助别人来换取名声的行为应该予以谴责。其一,求助者本来就很无助,把他们曝光宣传可能会加剧他们的痛苦,以因遭受家暴寻求帮助的妇女为例加以说明。其二,通过做好事来谋求名声是虚伪的做法。第三段总结全文:应真心实意地帮助别人,通过帮助别人来获取名声的做法应予以谴责。【知识模块】 大作文写作