1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 109 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 On Making FriendsA. Title: On Making FriendsB. Time limit: 40 minutesC. Word limit: 160-200 words (not including the given opening sentence)D. Your composition should be based on
2、 the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend“.OUTLINE:1. The need for friends2. True friendship3. My principle in making friends2 The Best Media to UseThere are plenty of options available for spreading news, such as newsp
3、apers, radio, TV, the Internet and so on. According to your option what is the best media to use? Why? Write a composition of 160-200 words.3 If I Have an Introverted FriendExtroverts and introverts usually perform differently in their social lives. Extroverts get energized by being around people, w
4、hile social activity, on the other hand, can exhaust introverts. Some people might think introverts is not easy-going and stay away from them, but thats misleading. If you have an introverted friend, what will you do? Write a composition of 160-200 words.4 Man and ComputerWrite an essay entitled Man
5、 and Computer by commenting on the saying, “The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like the computer.“ You should write 160-200 words.5 The Way to SuccessWrite a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincolns
6、 famous remark, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.“ You should write 160-200 words.考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 109 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 As a human being, one can hardly
7、 do without a friend. Since life is not always plain sailing, we may sometimes need friends to help us out of difficulties and we are also often asked to give a hand to them. With friendship, life is happy and harmonious; otherwise, it is sad and unfortunate. With friends we share what we have and i
8、n sharing, we learn what to treasure and what to tolerate.It is true that a friend in need is a friend indeed. A friend in need will share with us not only our joys but also our sorrows. He will warn us against danger in life. And when we meet with difficulties, he will show us concerns rather than
9、a cold shoulder. When we are in need, he will always extend to us a hand without hesitation.I think the most important principle in making friends is that the friendship should be set up with mutual understanding and trust. Friends should be kind, generous and honest to each other. If you smile at s
10、omeone, you are sure to get from him a smile as a return, arent you?【试题解析】 本文是一篇讨论文，要求对“交友”进行讨论。根据提纲，文章内容可安排如下：第一段说明人们需要朋友，朋友使我们的生活丰富多彩。第二段指出真正的朋友能够与我们同甘共苦，尤其在我们患难的时候伸出援助之手。第三段提出自己的交友之道。【知识模块】 大作文写作2 【正确答案】 We are now living in a time when information is explosive. It seems that we are somewhat over
11、whelmed by a huge variety of information. As far as I am concerned, I think the best media to spread news is the Internet.First of all, the Internet is a unique platform that involves both news senders and receivers. Traditional media, such as newspapers, radio and TV, are actually dominated by news
12、 senders. While with the help of the Internet, we can receive news and send out news. Whats more, we can comment on the news, which gives life to that piece of information and helps spread it among a certain community. Secondly, the Internet enables people to access news instantaneously. In terms of
13、 the speed of spreading news, the Internet is the best media to use. Unlike newspapers, which are published once per day, the Internet could update the news online at any time.In conclusion, the Internet is the best channel to inform people about news, because it is a two-way street that involves bo
14、th news readers and senders, and because it is an accessible source that could be updated whenever we want.【试题解析】 本题要求考生对“最好用的媒介”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：第一段从时代背景入题，指出传播信息的最好媒体是网络。第二段阐述原因：1网络是一个独特的平台，融合了信息的发布者和接收者，不同于传统单向媒体。2网络能让人们即时获取信息：相比较于传统媒体，网络的传播速度更快。第三段重申观点：网络是传播消息的最好渠道。【知识模块】 大作文写作3 【正确答案】 Ja
15、ne, a friend of mine, is quite reserved. She seldom talks but she likes reading books, lots of books. By definition, she is an introvert. But I think I will respect her personality and will not try to change her into an extrovert.First of all, introverted people are usually great ob-servers and thin
16、kers. Unlike extroverts, who love talking, partying and socializing, introverts like to be left alone. They tend to observe more, and think about what happens to and around them. That is why I often come to Jane for advice, when I want to solve a problem. She usually gives me a detailed analysis and
17、 practical solutions, for which I admire her deeply. Secondly, introverted people are more sensitive to inner feelings, thus having a greater chance to be excellent creators. It is found that many famous artists are introverted: they do not like social contact or group activities. I am always moved
18、and awed by the affective creation by introverted people.In conclusion, if I have an introverted friend, I would cherish him. I would ask him for help and appreciate his heartfelt works.【试题解析】 本题要求考生对“如果你有一个内向的朋友，你会怎样”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：第一段从朋友简的故事入题，指出如果我有一个内向的朋友，我会尊重她的性格，不会尝试把她变成外向的人。第二段阐述原因。1
19、性格内向的人善于观察和思考。举简为例，我会去找简咨询意见。2内向的人对内心的情感更敏感，因此更有能力成为优秀的创作者第三段总结：如果我有一个内向的朋友，我会好好珍惜他。【知识模块】 大作文写作4 【正确答案】 The computer has become an indispensable part in mans life. While it has brought great convenience to us, its rapid development has also aroused much concern about whether it will one day think l
20、ike man, or even worse, whether man will think like the computer.In my judgment, although the computer may have incredible intelligence and can take the place of human labor in many fields, it is unlikely that it will take the place of man someday. A computer has no independent thinking, and therefo
21、re it can never really think like man.However, with the frequent use of, and the increasing reliance on the computer, there is indeed a danger that some people may think and act the same way as the computer which is programmed. They may lose the ability to think critically and reactively, and eventu
22、ally develop some “programmed routine“ in their behavior, neglecting the rich subtleties of human feelings and e-motions.Therefore, while making good use of the computer, we should always bear in mind that it is only a useful tool for us, and that we can always think of better and more humane ways o
23、f coping with our needs or problems.【试题解析】 这是一篇主题句分析型习作。考生写作时应首先正确理解“真正的危险不在于计算机将开始像人类一样思考，而是人类将开始像计算机一样思考”这句话，围绕文章主题“人类与计算机”提出自己的观点并进行进一步的阐述，最后提出自己的建议或呼吁。根据题目要求，本文的结构可设计如下：第一段阐明题目引言的真正内涵。第二、三段阐述自己对引言的看法：首先，电脑没有独立思想，其取代人类的情形不可能发生：其次，使用计算机的人应保持自己独立的思维，否则会变得程序化。第四段总结观点：在使用电脑时，要知道电脑只是我们的一个工具，人类总会有更好的方法
24、来解决问题。【知识模块】 大作文写作5 【正确答案】 Abraham Lincoln once said, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.“ This famous remark sheds some light on the way to success. A good preparation is the prerequisite for success, although there are lots of factors that co
25、uld affect success.This has been confirmed by numerous evidences. Perhaps theres no better example than the case of hosting the Olympic Gameseither the hosting country or the athletes must take years of preparation for the one-month competition. The fact that years of research come ahead of minutes
26、of the successful launching of the satellites serves as another case in point. Moreover, history abounds with great men as Abraham Lincoln who believe that “A beard well lathered is half shaved“.It is advisable that we should attach great importance to thorough preparation. Well begun is half done,
27、so get fully prepared before you put your hand to a task.【试题解析】 这是一篇主题句分析型作文，要求从林肯的典故说起，围绕文章主题“通往成功之路”提出自己的观点并进行分析。根据题目要求可以将文章内容安排如下：第一段从林肯的典故“如果给我六小时砍一棵树，我会用前四小时磨斧头”说起，并提出观点：充分的准备是通往成功的先决条件。第二段以具体实例对观点进行论证。只有经过充分的准备，奥运会主办国以及奥运健将们才能获得成功；人造卫星数秒的发射成功与否取决于年复一年的精心准备；历史上有很多人像林肯一样坚信“磨刀不误砍柴工。”第三段总结并再次重申观点。【知识模块】 大作文写作
