1、考研英语写作-(二)及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BSection Writi(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions:You have bought a vacuum cleaner from a supermarket, but it disappointed you very much. Write a letter to Mr. Robert, the Sales Manager of the supermarket to make a complaint and ask for his help.You should write abou
2、t 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_2.Directions：You are supposed to write for the undergraduate association a notice to recruit volunteers for the local history museum. You should conclude the ba
3、sic qualification of application and the other information you think relative.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Undergraduate Association“ instead.（分数：20.00）_3.Directions:Write a letter to the president of your university to1)
4、 point out the problems of the canteen service on the campus, and2) make suggestions for improvement.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_4.Directions:You have just received a
5、letter from the marketing department of Unilever China, informing you of your recruitment. Please write a reply letter to show your appreciation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：2
6、0.00）_5.Directions：Youve received a wedding invitation from your best friend Jessie just now, but unfortunately you have something else to do that day and could not attend it. Please write a reply letter, telling her your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.You should write about
7、 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_考研英语写作-(二)答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BSection Writi(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions:You have bought a vacuum cleaner from a supermarket, but it disappointed you ver
8、y much. Write a letter to Mr. Robert, the Sales Manager of the supermarket to make a complaint and ask for his help.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Dear Mr. Robert,1
9、On Oct. 21st, I purchased a Vacuum Cleaner from your supermarket. Unfortunately, it completely failed my expectation.2Disappointingly, the vacuum cleaner doesnt work efficiently to pick up dust. To make it worse, when I went back to your store, I was told that because the cleaner was on sale, I coul
10、d not exchange or return it, which I was not informed when the purchase was conducted. 3I request that you provide me with a prompt solution, on the condition that once the cleaner proves to be of poor quality, I can change for a new one or I will get a refund.4I can be reached during the day at (80
11、6)3273551. Hope to hear from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Ming)解析：这是一篇投诉信件。投诉信件的写法一般是先直截了当地陈述要投诉的事情或物件，紧接着简明扼要地说明存在的问题，并提供解决方案，最后给出写信人的联系方式。信的措辞不卑不亢，即便投诉的内容令人不愉快，有礼貌地提出意见与解决方案即可，切勿让读者感到字里行间“怒气冲天”。 1开门见山说明购买吸尘器的时间与地点。以 Unfortunately 引出令人不愉快的内容。 2简明扼要地陈述吸尘器存在的问题，用 To make it worse 体现递进关系，将作者试图与销售处交涉未果后
12、的失望心情展现了出来。 3提出解决方案。 4提供联系方式。2.Directions：You are supposed to write for the undergraduate association a notice to recruit volunteers for the local history museum. You should conclude the basic qualification of application and the other information you think relative.You should write about 100 words
13、on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Undergraduate Association“ instead.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：( NOTICEJanuary 23rd1VOLUNTEERS are wanted for the local history museum! As a part of the voluntary work for Chinese Culture Expo, museum guidance welcomes YOUR PARTICIPATION
14、. 2This exposition begins on March 1st and lasts till April 30th.3Basic qualifications for applicants are as follows: Firstly, applicants should have a strong sense of responsibility and manage to work at least one day a week. Secondly, fluent Chinese and English speaking skills are absolutely essen
15、tial. In addition, undergraduates with voluntary experience are preferred.4The application form can be downloaded from oar home page. Please send your form to UGA_volunteergmafl. com before February 5th. For further information, please send your email to the above address as well.Undergraduate Assoc
16、iation)解析：这篇小作文考查告示的写法。具体格式请参见参考范文，需要提醒的是告示正文以 1-3 段为宜，不宜分段过多，落款应写在中间偏右位置。该范文的主要内容是某校的本科生学生会组织为当地某历史博物馆招聘学生志愿者，属于比较正式的告示，须结构严谨、用词贴切。 1可采用大写拼写达到吸引注意力的效果。 2说明该志愿者服务活动的持续时间，这一点非常必要。 3用 Firstly,Secondly,In addition 提出志愿者录用的条件，方便阅读，一目了然。 4指明报名方式，并提供联系方式，方便同学们咨询。3.Directions:Write a letter to the presiden
17、t of your university to1) point out the problems of the canteen service on the campus, and2) make suggestions for improvement.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Dear Mr
18、. President,1I am a senior in the Biology Department. 2Im writing to tell you some problems with the canteen service on campus and some suggestions on it.3We really dont think much of the quality of the food. The rice and bread are too hard for us to chew. The vegetables are often overcooked. 4Besid
19、es, the price of the food is too high. You know, some students families are very poor, and they are even short of tuition fees. 5 How can they afford such expensive meals? Furthermore, the attitude of the service staff to us is not acceptable.6Therefore, I suggest that we should have more than one c
20、anteen in the university. If there is competition between them, the above-mentioned problems will be solved more easily.7I sincerely hope that the canteen service will be improved soon. All of us will appreciate it. Thank you for your consideration!Yours sincerely,Li Ming)解析：这篇应用型书信习作，要求考生撰写一封信，根据写作
21、要求，作者可以先对存在的问题提出批评，然后提出相应的建议。写作时注意语言要得体，言辞不要太过激。 根据题目要求，文章的结构安排如下：第一段开门见山，指明写信的目的。 第二段具体描述食堂存在的问题：饭菜质量很难令人满意饭菜价格太高服务质量令人难以接受。 第三段简要提出建议。 第四段简要总结，注意使用礼貌语。 12表明写信人的身份及写信的目的。 3dont think much of 委婉地提出不足之处。 4Besides 引出饭堂的另外一些问题。 5巧妙使用修辞性问句，加强语气。Furthermore 补充说明还存在问题。 6提出建议。 7在结尾段用 I sincerely hope 和 app
22、reciate 礼貌地提出期望并表示谢意。4.Directions:You have just received a letter from the marketing department of Unilever China, informing you of your recruitment. Please write a reply letter to show your appreciation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the l
23、etter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Dear Sir/Madam,1I really appreciate that I have been given the chance to be a member of the marketing department of Unilever China.2I sincerely hope that it will be an extraordinary experience for me to work in such a well-known
24、company in the world. My earnest endeavors are to be made to fulfill the requirements of my position and to bring as many profits as possible to our company.3Thank you again for endowing me with such great trust and responsibility. I am sure my excellent performance will be the most favorable feedba
25、ck to your faith in me.Yours faithfully,Li Ming)解析：该作文要求考生向中国联合利华市场部写一封信，对公司给予其工作机会表示感谢。文章结构力求清晰简洁、重点突出。根据题目要求，信件应当在开头点明写信目的，即感谢公司为其提供工作机会；接着表明自己将在今后的工作岗位上努力的决心；最后再次向收信人表示感谢。 1以 I really appreciate that 句型开头，直接阐述写信的目的是感谢公司为其提供工作机会。 2用 I sincerely hope that 句型，表明自己将在今后的工作岗位上努力的愿望和决心。 3最后以 Thank you a
26、gain for句型再次向收信人表示感谢，并表明自己会以实际行动来回报公司的信任。5.Directions：Youve received a wedding invitation from your best friend Jessie just now, but unfortunately you have something else to do that day and could not attend it. Please write a reply letter, telling her your decision, stating your reason(s), and makin
27、g an apology.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead.Do not write the address.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Dear Jessie,1Thank you for your kind invitation to your wedding.2Unfortunately, I regret to tell you that due to some pri
28、or engagement, I will be unable to attend your wedding. I wish I could be at both places at the same time. Please accept my humble apologies for not being able to share your wedding celebrations.3Nevertheless, thank you again for inviting me and I am sure that your special day will be a happy and jo
29、yous occasion. I will share your joy in my heart from afar. Best wishes for your lifelong happiness.Yours sincerely,Li Ming)解析：这是一篇考查学生如何写信拒绝他人邀请的应用文。要求考生给好友写信，表明无法参加好友的婚礼。在结构上，应力求层次明晰，以感谢邀请开头，继而陈述无法出席婚礼的原因，并表示歉意，最终以真诚的祝愿结尾。在措辞上，要做到大方得体、不失礼貌。 1以感谢开头，这是拒绝他人邀请类信件的一般写法。 2以 Unfortunately 作为转折标志词，陈述无法到场的理南，regret to，I wish I could流露出作者的遗憾，紧接着用 humble apologies，作者的深深歉意跃然纸上。 3再次对受邀表示感谢，大方得体。表达对好友诚挚的祝愿，配上后文的 share your joy in my heart 等词句，将来自远方好友的深深祈福体现了出来。
