1、考研英语（写作）-试卷 11及答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.On Luxury Consumption A. Title: On Luxury Consumption B. Word limit: 160-200 words (not including the giv
2、en opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Nowadays, many people tend to spend more money on luxury commodities.“ OUTLINE: 1. The prevalence of luxury commodities in China 2. People“s different opinions on luxury c
3、ommodities 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_4.On Campus Marriage A. Title: On Campus Marriage B. Word limit: 160200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Sensitive as it might be, campus marr
4、iage has gained more support in recent years with the improvement of civil right consciousness in China.“ OUTLINE: 1. The current situation of campus marriage 2. People“s different views on it 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_5.To Buy or to Rent? A. Title: To Buy or to Rent? B. Word limit: 160-200 words (not
5、including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Today, the rocketing housing price has made it a huge burden for lots of people to possess a house.“ OUTLINE: 1. A general description of the present situ
6、ation 2. People“s different views 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_6.On TV Dating Shows A. On TV Dating Shows B. Word limit: 160200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “In recent years, ther
7、e are a flood of dating shows on TV.“ OUTLINE: 1. The popularity and controversy of TV dating shows 2. People“s different opinions on these shows 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_7.How to Reduce Damage Caused by Natural Disasters? A. Title: How to Reduce Damage Caused by Natural Disasters? B. Word limit: 1602
8、00 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Human beings are often faced with natural disasters such as earthquakes, floods, hurricanes, and tsunamis which cause serious losses.“ OUTLI
9、NE: 1. The natural disasters human beings are often faced with 2. Concrete measures to reduce the damage caused by these disasters 3. Making a conclusion（分数：2.00）_考研英语（写作）-试卷 11答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 1
10、60-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.On Luxury Consumption A. Title: On Luxury Consumption B. Word limit: 160-200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Now
11、adays, many people tend to spend more money on luxury commodities.“ OUTLINE: 1. The prevalence of luxury commodities in China 2. People“s different opinions on luxury commodities 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Nowadays, many people tend to spend more money on luxury commodities. It is reported t
12、hat China has ranked as the second largest country on luxury consumption, surpassing the United States. As regards this phenomenon, there has been a heated discussion among people. Advocates take it for granted that people should spend more money to improve their living standards when they become ri
13、cher. In addition, luxury consumption can help promote China“s domestic consumption, thus contributing to the financial revenue. However, other people hold an opposite viewpoint These people, who value the traditional virtue of frugality, consider luxury consumption as a waste of money and they beli
14、eve quite some luxury commodities are expensive but not practical. What“s more, they claim that those luxury goods buyers might as well spend more money upgrading themselves or doing some charity work. Personally speaking, I object to luxury consumption. As far as the quality of commodities is good
15、enough and can meet our needs, it is not necessary to go crazy for luxury consumption. In my eyes, money spent on luxury commodities can be used to do something far more meaningful.)解析：解析： 本文是一篇议论文，讨论奢侈品消费的话题。文章内容可安排如下： 第一段直入主题，概述奢侈品在中国日趋流行的现象。 第二段说明人们对奢侈品的两种不同观点：支持者认为奢侈品消费理所当然；反对者认为奢侈品不实用，浪费金钱。 第三段
16、发表自己的看法：反对奢侈品消费。4.On Campus Marriage A. Title: On Campus Marriage B. Word limit: 160200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Sensitive as it might be, campus marriage has gained mo
17、re support in recent years with the improvement of civil right consciousness in China.“ OUTLINE: 1. The current situation of campus marriage 2. People“s different views on it 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Sensitive as it might be, campus marriage has gained more support in recent years with the
18、 improvement of civil right consciousness in China. Although permitted by relevant laws, campus marriage remains a highly controversial issue in China. Some people find it natural for college students to get married, because these students are already adults. They of course have the right to decide
19、whether to enter into a marriage by themselves. In addition, married students usually behave in a more grown-up way. They tend to show better insight into both personal and social responsibility, which benefits themselves a lot. Others, however, hold a totally different view. They insist that the ma
20、in task for students should be study, and the establishment of a family will definitely distract them from it. Furthermore, adults as they are, college students are still not financially independent and not able to shoulder the responsibility of taking care of the family mentally. From where I stand
21、, campus marriage shouldn“t be encouraged because most of us are not well prepared for starting a new family. At present we“d better focus on our academic studies and self-improvement. Marriage is a matter to be considered in the future.)解析：解析：本文是一篇议论文，讨论大学生结婚的话题。文章内容可安排如下：第一段点明现状，说明大学生结婚得到更多人的支持。第二
22、段指出这仍是一个极具争议的话题，引出不同的观点，并分别论证。第三段提出“我”的看法：大学生结婚不应被鼓励，大学生应把精力集中在学习上5.To Buy or to Rent? A. Title: To Buy or to Rent? B. Word limit: 160-200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Toda
23、y, the rocketing housing price has made it a huge burden for lots of people to possess a house.“ OUTLINE: 1. A general description of the present situation 2. People“s different views 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Today, the rocketing housing price has made it a huge burden for lots of people t
24、o possess a house. To buy or to rent? Different people hold different views. A lot of people suppose that young people should buy houses as early as possible because according to current trend, housing prices, especially in big cities, are unlikely to decline. What“s more, it is very possible that t
25、he housing price will get higher and higher, thus making the financial burden much heavier. However, others think the other way round. They don“t want to be mortgage slaves who are under great financial pressure, which might lower the quality of life. Besides, they believe that, by renting an apartm
26、ent, they can easily move to another one if they are not satisfied with the current one or they want to make change of their circumstances. It is understandable that almost every one wants to own a house, but we have to deal with it in the light of specific conditions. We“d better consider renting a
27、n apartment before we can afford a house. If we are determined to buy a house, we should make a thorough and rational consideration about lots of factors, including our buying power, the consequences and the like.)解析：解析：本文是一篇议论文，话题是租房还是买房。文章内容可安排如下：第一段指出房价高企，关于买房还是租房，人们看法不一。第二段具体阐述人们的两种不同看法。第三段发表自己的
28、看法：买得起房子之前先考虑租房；若要买房则需根据自己的情况作充分而理智的分析。6.On TV Dating Shows A. On TV Dating Shows B. Word limit: 160200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “In recent years, there are a flood of d
29、ating shows on TV.“ OUTLINE: 1. The popularity and controversy of TV dating shows 2. People“s different opinions on these shows 3. My opinion（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： In recent years, there are a flood of dating shows on TV. Perhaps no TV programs today are as controversial yet popular as TV dating show
30、s. Towards this kind of shows, people hold different views. Some people appreciate these shows. They believe that for people who have difficulty in finding their Mr. Right or Miss Right, TV dating shows serve as a good platform to present themselves and provide them a very good opportunity to know m
31、ore single people so that they have more chances to find a sweet heart. However, other people maintain a different view. They argue that TV dating shows more often than not serve as amusement and few people can succeed in finding their Mr. Right or Miss Right there. They also worry that these shows
32、may have some bad influence on the young people, because some guests attach too much importance to money or appearance, and even convey incorrect values. As far as I am concerned, TV dating shows are real blessing for those who need to find a life partner and they should be encouraged. With regard t
33、o the negative aspects of these shows, I believe they can be settled with due efforts.)解析：解析： 本文是一篇议论文，话题是相亲节目。文章内容可安排如下： 第一段指出电视相亲节目泛滥这一现象，引出人们对这一话题的争议。 第二段表述不同人的观点：有些人欣赏电视相亲节目，认为是个很好的相亲平台；另一些人则认为其名不符其实，对年轻人有不良影响。 第三段阐述自己的观点：支持并鼓励电视相亲节目。7.How to Reduce Damage Caused by Natural Disasters? A. Title:
34、How to Reduce Damage Caused by Natural Disasters? B. Word limit: 160200 words (not including the given opening sentence) C. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Human beings are often faced with natural disasters such as earthquakes
35、, floods, hurricanes, and tsunamis which cause serious losses.“ OUTLINE: 1. The natural disasters human beings are often faced with 2. Concrete measures to reduce the damage caused by these disasters 3. Making a conclusion（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Human beings are often faced with natural disasters such
36、 as earthquakes, floods, hurricanes, and tsunamis which cause serious losses. It“s important for us to work out effective measures to reduce damage and casualty. So what can we do concretely? First of all, it is vital to have a sense of prevention. As is known, most natural disasters are caused by h
37、uman activities. For example, global warming is closely related to carbon emissions. To reduce the damage caused by natural disasters, we should first protect the environment and make sure that what we do now goes harmoniously with the nature. Second, be well-prepared. Improvement in early warning s
38、ystems, such as techniques of earthquake prediction, is of great importance for people to survive in disasters. Moreover, people should also be well-informed of how to save themselves in an emergency. Third, the government should perfect the coping mechanism in disaster management. Stronger coordina
39、tion is needed among all governmental departments and nongovernmental organizations so that we can better deal with all kinds of natural disasters. To sum up, besides thinking of relief work after a disaster, making full prevention, preparation and planning ahead of time are very essential to reduce damage and casualty.)解析：解析： 本文是一篇议论文，主题为减少自然灾害带来的损害。文章内容可安排如下： 第一段提出灾害频发的现象，呼吁采取有效措施应对自然灾害。 第二段分析可有效应对自然灾害的措施：保护环境预防灾害：改进灾害预警系统；政府改进灾难处理机制等。 第三段总结全文：只有全方面防范和治理自然灾害，才能减少损失。
